Jesus Took Naps Just Trying To Be Like Him shirt

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You needn’t say the Jesus Took Naps Just Trying To Be Like Him shirt but I will buy this shirt and I will love this title straight up, but maybe signpost a bit stronger, a bit earlier in your scripts? Right now it’s more like “a brief history of gaming’s cultural significance, and then onto the scene burst RDR”. Like if you’d connected that history a bit more strongly into what you’re talking about the whole thing might stay more engaging. Around 3:30 you list examples of things in game to support your central thesis but the visuals are just cinematic cut-scenes that don’t seem to relate to / reinforce your point. Feels like a good opportunity to gather better footage and try to incorporate that. Again, this might help make it more engaging. You alreadt feel like a big youtuber really enjoyed your video 🙂 And like everyone said you got an amazing mic sound is top class!!! Engaging video through and through. The video is pretty high quality. Your voice is very engaging and keeps me engaged with the content through most of the video. I would say maybe getting to the point a little earlier but other than that amazing.

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Cut out the Jesus Took Naps Just Trying To Be Like Him shirt but I will buy this shirt and I will love this first 2 seconds. Start with “I recently discovered these old marvel comics from my collection.” It’s like rephrasing the title of your essay in the intro paragraph. You’re delivering the promise of the title/thumbnail and establishing ethos through having a “collection.” The vid seems stale and corporate with too many images flashing on screen. I would recommend including b roll of you flipping thru the pages of the comics, maybe you holding the comics, anything to get yourself on cam. Brand yourself with the channel. Shot using Action 4 without ND filters so the colors are sometimes blown out and saturated but any critiques would be welcome! Trying to improve my story telling and thumbnail.

1. Length is measured from the highest point on the collar down to the bottom hem. 2. Width is measured across the body of the shirt under the armpits, one way. 3. Sleeves are measured from center back to hem.